Can a native Japanese translate some English to Japanese for me? thanks.?

I am in San Francisco now. Everything to me is so different here. After I adjust myself to this new environment, maybe I'll send you some photos of my school life.|||私は今サンフランシスコにいます。


ここでは、私にとっては何もかもが異なります。


この新しい環境に慣れたら、


私の学校生活の写真をあなたに送るかもしれません。


Watashi wa ima San Francisco ni imasu.


Koko dewa watashi ni totte wa nanimokamo ga kotonari masu. Kono atarashii kankyou ni naretara, watashi no gakkou seikatsu no shashin wo anata ni okuru kamo shiremasen.





I don't like literal translations. Quite often they don't work either way. Recently I've come to the realization that as long as I stick to literal translation, I won't be able to make much progress in learning English. I think the same goes for learning Japanese... Said that, here I've tried to make it as faithful to the original as possible.|||"watashi wa sanfuranshisuko ni ima iru . watashi henosubetehatotemo kotona tteirukokoni . watashi gakono atarashi i kankyou ni jibunjishin wo awa seta nochi , tabunwatashi wa watashi no gakkou no seimei noaru shashin wo okuru ."